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person Kitty Felone
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
O_O;;; perverted dreams... though I must admit I have them often as well. Heh, I couldn't see Erik masturbating at Christine's form.
person Kitty Felone
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Him kissing her could have made her have a heart attack... *snickers* Just wondering whats gonna happen when they mate...
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
What else could he have found that would be so shocking?
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I think she should tell him what happened... maybe he won't try to fuck her... knowing she was already raped.
person Kitty Felone
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
aww.... how sweet.....
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19

I'm back! Sorry I have not reviewed before now but I've been away for a bit.
Loved the chapter but it also made me sad to see Gia so torn. I really hope Christine does not try to go back to Erik. They both really are not good for each
person Charne
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Update soon plz!
person Kitty Felone
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Update will ya! U are great at this fic and I want MOOORE!
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story on fanfiction.net, and I have to say that it one of the most enjoyable E/OC's that I have ever read. You keep the existing characters from deviating from their original personalities (flaws and all), and you examine their
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20

Boy, did I have mixed emotions in this chapter! I felt so sorry for Gia being caught up in all the accusations one second and then I wanted to deck Erik for being such an idiot and getting her in trouble the next! Then, I really loved Gia\