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person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28

I'm so sorry I'm behind on reviewing! :(
The story is great as always, but my personal life has gotten in the way of my reviews! BLAH!
Enough of that, now on to my review. Please, please don't take this the wrong way but I think Erik
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29

Great chapter! There was a lot going on there!
I wonder what Erik will do now that he knows Gia loves him? If the man has any sense, he'll know he has a good thing and forget Christine.
Speaking of Christine, I about had an attack whe
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30

What a great chapter! I have to tell you, I was about ready to strangle Erik myself when he did not believe at first that Gia loved him.
It was so nice to read that they are back together!
I was slightly miffed at Erik though, thinking he
person Britt
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I thought I was an E/C shipper... until this day! It really says something about this story if it can make me forget my long-seated hatred of OCs, lol. Almost hurts to say it, but i really, really like Gia.

By the way... Jean-Paul Chretien? Do you
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31

Wow! That was a great chapter!
Gia finally showed Erik some real backbone when she told him why she was jealous. Way to go Gia!
I'm glad Erik too has confessed his love to her. It's about time!
This is the best story. Wonderful writ
person Kitty Felone
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
haha.. questions of all who heard! XP
person Britt
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Heyheyhey! that last sentance had better not be foreshadowing... *happy ending or else!*

Nonwithstanding, I love your story! Keep the good stuff coming, every time there's a new chapter up it completely makes my day.
person LoveGuardian
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
That last sentence had better be just a general comment. But with Christine arriving soon, I can't help but wonder if she will inadvertently cause trouble for the loving couple. Please don't let them get into a huge fight or something like that!! Althou
person LoveGuardian
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say right now that Adrienne is a Bi***? Can't she just mind her business for once?? At least she didn't follow them into Erik's lair. Oh well, drama is fun.

Anyways, the church scene was interesting. It's a good thing that Erik heard Gia
person Britt
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*AND THE PLOT THICKENS* Damn that girl, anyway. I suppose somebody had to see them eventually, though. Grr.
Lovely writing, as always!