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*snuffles* truly a lovely story, I adore it... and I usually don't go in for this kind of stuff, but this is so subtly and beautifully done... I hope she feels better, I would love to get to read/hear the rest of it. Ja~!

~SHHHHH!---AnonyMouse~

OOoooo!!! I like this one please update soon this is very good. I really, really want to see Norington get whats coming to him I hope "Lizzie Turner" has a hand along with Captian Jack Sparrow. Of course Will needs to get his revenge too but this should be good I never thought the Govenor would haven ien involved but I guess so. To let a small child be treated like that GGGRRRR they all need to be flogged or what ever it is you call it when you attach them to the front of the ship (I can't spell it). Again update soon please!!!

This is wonderful please continue this soon!!!

I really *really* like this story and would love to see more of it... you wouldn't happen to have a webpage of your own wheris iis is posted would you?

Well, dangat wat was quite good!! But do ya think ya can do me a favor and finish it!!! Or at least atempt to add on?!! I mean really, just too interesting to leave hanging like that! Poor Will, man what happened to him!?! Details! Details!

I still love it!

This is a really great story! I'm really, really enjoying it thus far! I'm sorry to here you're not feeling well, honestly I've had a few too many life-threatening skirmishes with illnesses for my taste too, but I hope with all my heart you recover! You have such a wonderful story going here, such wonderful talent too I might add, I would hate for it to be wasteful and remain unfinished. So please, try your best to get well as quickly as you can, or if that's not plausible then just relax and read the other wonderful fanfiction (not to mention watch the movie another couple of times too) and when you're better you'll be all set to start again from where you left off. A couple of tips I might include would be to shorten the chapters a bit, edit the content. If you feel it is all relevant to the story then put it in numerous chapter format. There's just something about a long chapter that scares readers off easily (from experiance of course), they just can't bring themselves to stop in the middle! Oh, I do hope you're feeling better now. My Goodness, I missed four and a half weeks of school this year and I don't think I'll ever catch up with my work (which is what I should be doing right now mind). I'll leave you be now and get back then. I'm rooting for you though and my sincerest wishes because I've found health and family to be everything. Best wishes, get better soon, and good luck!

This story is absolutely brilliant! I love it! It's definitely one of my favorites. The way you portrayed Jack was totally in-character, and fit him to a T. You did Will and the other characters well, too. I certainly hope there is more to this awesome tale! |^_^|

This is SO well written! I love it and i hope you feel beeter!

Another finely written chapter. You do this fandom proud, truly! Excellent.