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by inuyashasgirl

person Miya Sparrow
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it reminded me some what of Secert Window.....I was just waiting for Will to kill them all....heheheh I liked it thought very cool and sweet.
person Migya
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More Chapys More Chappys!!! Hurry up with more chappys!!!

Caffine is good!!! LOL
person Kimberly
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that it was a really great story. I loved every chapter. I hope that you will continue to write other chapters cause it is just so good.
Please if possible please inform me when or if you add any new chapters.
Thank you.
Kim.
person SesshoumarusMistress
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I love teh plot! PLZ PLZ PLZ continue & update ASAP!!
person Sev
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nay, Anni, I didnt mean that... its just that I love this fic to bits and it really gets me annoyed when people slate it because they happen to prefer Will to Jack... I , I , I hate the Will/Jack pairing (Will may be gay, Jack is most definitely not!) but I dont leave reviews for stories of that pairing being nasty about it. Sorry if I pissed anyone off (except Nina, who needs to learn some manners!)
person Anni
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, Sev, the only comments allowed should be good reviews? I agree that a reviewer should never be rude, but you can't expect everyone to like everything. I would think that writers want to hear from readers. This fic has been hit 650-some times, and there are only these few reviews. Should people stop ewinewing if they don't just love it?
person Sev
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Nina... I really wish you`d stop slating this fic... just cos you don`t like the pairing or the way Will is portrayed is no reason to be nasty! This is one of the best POTC fanfics around... so there! Go and get a life!
person Elizabeth
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the best story this is how the movie should have ended jack and elizabeth together forever need chapters
person Sev
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE! I`m an impatent sod I know, but PLEEEEEEEEZE give us MORRRREEEE!!! I`m sure i`m not the only one! Why don`t you put a lovely detailed description of Jack naked in there... mmm, now that WOULD make my day, hee hee (*giggles and blushes)
keep up the VERY good work!
Sev xxxXXXxxx
person Sev
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW this just keeps getting better and better... keep it up!