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by inuyashasgirl

person DarkBubbleGum
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH! What is it with you and these damn cliffhangers?
I love that you post 4 chapters at a time but my God!
This is totally awesome, the best Jack/Elizabeth i have read in a long time, and amazingly different cause you didn't do it using that blasted island scene!
Keep up the excellent work, I cannot wait for your update!

DBG
person Sev
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... hav have me gagging for more here... please, update soon! I wil be checking back every day... hell, i`m even adding this as a rec!! KEEP UP THE VERY GOOD WORK!
xxx Sev xxx (^0^)
person Nina
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, gibve Will some dignity, makes him KICKS THAT WHORE !!!!
person Lizzie
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story need more
person Jezrael the Jealous
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O ...Oh my god.. what's gonna happen?! *dies from the suspense.*
person DarkBubbleGum
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And you just stop there?
For the love of my sanity...or what's left of it...PLEASE update soon!
This is a great story, not many Jack/Elizabeth's going around and I really think you are doing this pairing proud here. Please update soon.

DBG

Happy New Year
person Nina
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a disgusting whore!
person Sev
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... you have to give me more of this! Jack Sparrow (my apologies... CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow) is sooo sexy... mmm, please, you can`t leave it at that!
Drink up, me hearties, yo ho! (^=^)
xxx Sev xxx
person Nemain
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers. Powerful stuff!