rate_review Reviews

that almost made me cry! poor jamie, poor jackie too

wow!

I've always liked the thought of Jack and Norri (Tho others who know me hate me for talking about it, claiming Jack belongs with Will *mutters to self* ^Don't mind me^ anyway, back to the review... ) and I think this story was very well writtend Ind I loved it!

It was sad, but lovely. Tore at me heart it did (I think and talk like Jack, ^don't mind me^)

*wonders off*
*comes running back*
Oh! Lots of Love, keep writing or I'll hunt you down...*smiles brightly*
*wonders off again*

I am trying to decide whether to strange you for making me cry or give you a good review. **Furious musing, pushes down twitching of fingertips**

Sorry about that. Fantastic story! Part e mae may never forgive you, but it was beautiful, and the way that James was helpless to stop Jack's death was v. v. reali. Co. Congrats on a great story, love.

"(...) struck the wordless blow that cursed James as surely as Cortez’ treasure had once cursed Barbossa and his crew. Jack looked down at him, as if there were no one else there at all, looked directly into James eyes, and smiled, a small, sad, smile, mouth moving in silent syllables that James’ could read as easily as hear the loudest shout: ‘Not your fault, love.’" This is perfect, I loved it. I don't like the pairing and you killed Jack *sniff* but it's very well written. I think it would've been great if it had ended there. You made me gape. Great work.