rate_review Reviews

Emmarella is exactly the sort of girl that makes me hate romance novels. I own exactly one romance novel, and the only two reasons I haven't thrown it away is 1. because it was a birthday present from my grandfather on my 14th birthday. and 2. because he had the sense not to get me a Harliquinn romance or something else along those lines and instead got me one that was actually about 87% historical fiction 13% romance, which I can deal with. I hate stories with unrealistically perfect characters where the entire thing is just smoochies and sex.

which is not to say I don't enjoy the occaisionall smutty fic, but that's different.

I really really enjoyed this fic, especially will's complete disgust with the story of Emmarella

oh this is simply hilarious. nice to see romantic side to jack! XD

exceptionally well written! i commend you!

MONTY PYTHON! Runs round in circles, flapping arms, until eventually falls over own feet and lands in unceremonious heap. I just love it when people quote monty python. Spot on with the criticisms too....

You rule for putting the Montey Python thing in. I read the part of the Aferican Sparrows and I'm like "Why the heck's there a number next to it? Everyone should know that that's Montey Python." And if you don't, then rent the movie. Or I'll virtually attack you. But it's not for everyone. Some people just don't get it. Oh yeah, back to the review, normally, I don't read slash, but that's all I could find in this damn thing (that, and Jack/Liz, and I'm not really their biggest fan) so I chose to read yours. And I'm glad I did. It's great.

Wow,what a great and entertaining story! Probably the best POTC fic I've read. It was funny, sweet and sexy-even without a lemon. I must say that I really dislike Mary Sues-especially since 99% of the ones I've seen are indeed supposed to represent the author. It's just so naive and see-through.. and to think girls STILL do It gIt goes to show they never read Bad Fic Warnings.

White Dog

*giggles* I love it, I love it. "The author describes her eyebrows?" Wonderful. Most amusing. Woo. ^_^

Hey this is very cute! *giggles and glomps Jack and Will (being mindful of his wounds)*

Personally, I hate the Mary Sue too, but if you have an OC who is NOT with any of the canon characters, then I don't really mind. Like my OC, she's actually Will's aunt, and a former crewmember of the Pearl, so she knows Jack, and it's a Jack/Will slash adventure, not a MarySue of sorts. *shrugs* I don't know why that's relevant, but that's just what I think.

Jack: *whaps her with a pillow* Quiet! You're just rambling now.

Will: *rolls eyes and winces, rubbing his ribs*

Elven: (*scolding*) Mind that, whelp Wil Will: *scowls*

Jack: *grins*

Elven: I loved it!

Ta!

Aww, this is great! You captured their banter wonderfully. I suppose it would be a bit rude to ask for the prequel? I would *love* to see your Jack and Will in a h/c fic.

hehehe I love the Monty Python quote, great read.