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for It Must Have Been Terrible

by Moonshade

person Naur
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am so loving this! Your author notes at the end totally crack me up! Can the next time Jack & Will start singing that song from Fellowship? "The wind may blow...but there still be many miles to go!" Yes something like that. Oh and the line in the first chapter!! "I swear it's like he's trying to speak to me..." That was so great! Please continue! I am loving it!
person Violet Bunny
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so freakin' hilarious. I love "Leggy" too *huggles Legalos*. Update soon, I love this fic.
person Sarryn
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I am most eager to read about Jack taking care of poor Will! Please update soon!
person KarmaKid
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must state first and formost that the thing which prompted me to leave a review was the title of your
second chapter. Not to say your story wasn't worth reviewing otherwise, I'm just horribly lazy. Yet, when I
recognized that you must be a Beck fan, you became definitely deserving of some type of response.
Because that's how I gage people, by their musical likes and dislikes...lol. As for the story itself, I'd say
you'vhievhieved your intended goal of quirky, and also it's quite funny. Your take on Captain Jack is one of
the best I've read. And though I'm not sure what the deal with Will is, I was cracking up imagining him falling
into the sea multiple times. So all in all I'm enjoying what you're doing here, hope it continues, and am
looking forward to them gettin' it on. Cause I'm a perv like that.
person Lydia NightShade
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!!!

*holds sides* Oh my god! That's hilarious! You're little things at the end had me rolling, especially the most recent one with Leggy and Will's stuffy speach! Hahahahahaha! I could so picture that so clearly in my head and Jack jealousy pushing Leggy out of the fic *snickers uncontrolabley* Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaa!!

Oh man! I canwaitwait for more of this.... hell I may just read on for the skits at the end lol! I love you, anyone that can make me laugh is beautiful!

~lydia~
person Sarryn
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly intriguing beginning. I hope to read more. Quite, quite entertaining. Excellent.