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for Entrenchment

by jenab

schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was HOT!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very hot. I glad to find a oneshot were Dom and Brian aren't OOC.
Good job.
=)
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it ^_^
person Xadrian
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. Character voices were fairly true, which was a great surprise. Packed quite a lot into a PWP. Very nice writing.
person Nina
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow they almost got caught! *WHEW*
person Raquedan
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm impressed. Not much M/M appeals to me, you got some serious talent here.
person lovelykiss
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was effing sexy as hell! i always love this pairing!
person Laura
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the good old PWP, what would we do without it?

This was great - much hotness and the added frisson of almost being found out...Nice :D
person Shinna
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person shameika
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanifc please write nore soon