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for Entrenchment

by jenab

person aphinna
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good can't wait to read the next chapter. update soon
person Jen
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hot damn! VERY cool fic
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OI OI OI OI THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!!!! Whew Please tell me you are going to write more to that??? Maybe another chapter? Well if you don't (but i really hope you do) you deff. should write more fast and the furious!!! You are AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person troublegirl
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Hot! I'een een looking for a good Dom/Brian fic every since I saw this movie, and you've given it to me. I think you did the characters justice in that you didn't make them all lovey-dovey, but showed them as being very masculine. Those two guys together is what dreams are mof. of. Thanks!
person SilverFire
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The great part, was I could see it. I could actually see Dom and Brian saying that. It as tight. That was a good one. I luv Dom. You had them in charactor. That was good. Mad props to you! That's what a good piece is. I liked it. Loved it. Very good!
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn that was exactly what I pictured when I saw the movie. *fans self* Whew. Vin is tataly fuckable and every movie of his that I have seen I picture him with a man from thet movie. To bad I can't find alot of quality VIn fics. I love this fic!!!! mmmmmmmmm *goes to re read*
person Reen
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was great! Very sexy. Ah, the utter masculinity of it all! Good work, babe.