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by jenab

person Raquedan
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU are a tease! Seriously! I love it, but you never finish, at least not to my twisted staisfaction...did I even spell that right? Love your work, really.
person jim
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want you to keep working on this story, or at least do some more obi-wan and siri
person Dru
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Now are we ever going to get to see Siri and Obi Wan go all the way? I'm getting very concerned for these two! Lovely, sexy story. More please!
person Dru
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I wish you would expand a little bit though. Tell how Obi Wan got her out in the alley without her suspecting sas aas about to get her just deserts. After all, she didn't think he'd ever try anything so it would be interesting to read how he got her in that postion. It's been awhile since you updated this. I hope you haven't abandoned it!
person StormXPadme
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaw... MORE! LOL this was nearly disappointing in the end +G*
person StormXPadme
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that oen made me laugh :) and gave me ideas for a story! *leaves to write* :D very good *smiles*