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for Death

by Lor

schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
such a good, yet really creeepy/scary story.
GO FETCH THE NEXT CHAPTER! xd
:)
person LuciousdaRam
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so need an update!!! Should've kbown Tran wouldn't just go away!!! JACKASS!!!!

Update SOON!!
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* This story is so good!!!! It has so much suspence and it is so exciting to read! I can't wait to find out what will hapen next!

~Demondogs
person Audrey Cold
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I have to say when i started to read this i siad OMG this is totally lame but its not! I really liked it (so far anyway) and you need more. You cant jsut leave it with Go Fetch My Car!!!! PLEASE!! If your not gonna update ever could you email me and tell me so i know not to look for updates. PLEASE!!
~|~Audrey~|~
person friendlyQuark
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, you have some spelling errors, but nothing that a good beta couldn't fix for you. I like the story and I like the characterizations, would love to see you finish this one.