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by scatteredlogic

person AK_IceQueen
schedule October 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Probably one of my favorite Sarah/Jareth fics. Excellent story! Not going to lie, binge read this over the weekend. No regrets. I'll definitely read this again. Great job!

person Dee
schedule April 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Funny, sweet, touching and absolutely perfect! Thanks :) x
person gghanima
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bloody fucking brilliant. first labyrinth fanfic ive read and i LOVED it!
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story was excellent but I wouldn't have minded an epilogue containing information about those "more than 2.5 kids." (lol)
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was Very well written good job!!
person Savaial
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story! I've read this before but I can't remember where. I was so happy to see it again and get the chance to read the way you paint Jareth and Sarah once more. Lots of real interaction, real emotion and delicious friction. You did a great job with this story. I love it.
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*_________________*So beautiful and wonderful, I beg you to write another one involving Jareth and all his hotness...I believe you captured his personality perfectly as well as Sarah's. ^____^ You have made my night ^_^ Wriiite more *begs*
person Lizard
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squee*

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Oh, this was lovely. I really love how you slowly developed Jareth's increasing feelings for Sarah, and the characterisation was spot on. I was particularly glad to see that you didn't make Sarah into a perfect human being, and Jareth's thought processes made me laugh. :D So awesome! Thank you.
person Lish
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. *applauds* I stayed up all night just to read this. this is not my fandom nor my genre and also I'm a die hard slasher. I am so shocked to have read this and I am also very glad. umm if you can't tell I loved it more than I can possibly say. do you have more fics that you have recently written? I would be very interested in reading them. I hope that you get this, odds are you won't. *g* thank you so much
-Lish
person Anna McNarin
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this story of yours. The flow was nice and clear, and the characters had a life of their own. Bravo.