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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Melantha
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe!! Yes, to get true confessions, one must get subject drunk, or at least tipsy...Woo!! ^_^
person Alesun
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is absolutely beautiful. This makes my heart all warm and fuzzy and not in the I've got heartburn kind of way. Oh and I hope you have tons of fun in Las Vegas with the pretty man himself!! Have a safe trip.
person aimless
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh this story just gets better and better. David Bowie concert in Vegas? I am so jealous. Have a wonderful time hon. As always I look forward to your next chapter
person KaeNoel
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehehhehehehehehehehehehe I can't wait for more, have fun on your trip and get back soon! Yay!
person Manda The Witch
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hey Hey! Get back here you have a story to finish. No Fair! Yeah yeah yeah i know basis for comparison not withstanding come on! i need more Jareth smoochies.
person ...
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was wondering if u could e-mail me when this is updated? I would be very thankful i luv the story
person ASWitch
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I only discovered AFFNet a couple of days ago and I've already devoured your last story and thoroughly enjoying this one. Reminds me why I longed to have a little brother to give away to the Goblin King ;)
person Alesun
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Yes, I knew the puppy eyes wouldn't fail me. No one has the power to resist the puppy eyes!!!
On that note, this chapter was great and I can't wait until you post the next one (as usual). Please update ASAP, because I'd really hate to use the puppy eyes on you again.
person Midnight
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow- you're a great writer!! i read both a necessary deception AND this one and labyrinth fics can\et aet any better than this ^_^ Gee, i wonder when you're going to work on the sequel for necessary deception? Can't wait! ;) Take care!
person nights
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah!thank you so much for continuing the y
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you always have a way with keeping the reader interested and wanting more