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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Evelyn
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so here goes:
A. Marvelous once again. Heh, I'm beginning to run out of adjectives.
B. You are going to see David Bowie?! I am completely jealous and will expect something of a description. If you wouldn't mind, that is.
C. Have fun!
person Talene
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Trust me....I am not kind at all but, give credit where it is due! hehe Thank you and take your time sweetie....my stories aren't going anywhere just yet. ;) Another brilliant chapter! See ya soon!
person Manda The Witch
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehe!!! Only a dead women sweetie! well keep it up, but no smoochies :-( Noooooooooo! Oh well I'll wait patiently. *sighs* if I have to. Oh well. I can't wait to see what Sarah has to say to explain why Jareth is in her world. Hehehehe! CHaos Yay!!
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I do have a few more ideas involving Jareth floating around in my head...maybe in one he'll "accidentally" lose his shirt. Or perhaps go the towel route. Yes, I do believe I'll be turned into at least a semi-smut artist yet (as far as public viewing is concerned).
person Evelyn
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless. This is too great. Please update quickly!
person Alesun
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*intensifies the puppy-dog stare* It will work, I promise you.
person Melantha
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eee, so cool! I like it, as always. You are the perfect author for me. Love the story and you update almost every other day or something! Wow!!!!!!!!!! Just....Holy GODS!!! *is amazed*

Love ya!
~Melantha
"There never was a good war or a bad peace."~Unknown
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, but you are ever the talented author. I wish I wrote half so well. I have 2 stories out there and they are slow going. One was slow going enough that someone asked me if they could take over about the time I was done with the next chapter. *shakes head* I politely refused havehaven't heard from said person again. Guess they're pissed at me now. *shrugs* Real life does have a tncy ncy to intrude. Perhaps you could take a glance at them and tell me what you think but, no worries if yon'tn't. You are likely crafting such intricate plots as this one and others. hehe Looking forward to more. See ya!
person Anna
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Perhaps now she can enjoy the holiday without all those bad memories. Sarah needs to be cautious when she tells Jareth about the agreement she made. I don't think he is going to react very well, but it's good that she waits until after christmas. I am looking forward to see Jareth's reaction to his surprise. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
person Evelyn
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Way to leave me hanging! Hahaha, once again, I applaud you. Stunning work; I can't seem to get over it. Update quickly, please!