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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Alesun
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Why haven't you updated yet??? Please *gives you the poor, pathetic puppy-dog eyes in hopes it'll speed you up*
person Kae Noel
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
again, bravo bravo. *sighs* so fabulous, I want my own Jareth. He'd be so much fun to bitch at and then kiss ravishingly , totally perplexing him mwhahaha
person Morrigan
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh.
This is perfect...."There might have been some singing...". I'm still laughing about that one.
Wonderful scene, that. I'm so looking forward to see how this turns out
Do you realize you made me break one of my cardinal rules for reading fan fiction? I usually never bother with works in progress; I don't have the nerves for it. But since I read that first story of yours (it was "Crossing the Line") I cannot seem to stay away from whatever you choose to write. Right now I'd proably read your shopping list, too, in case you'd post it ;) *sigh* So, there's truth to the theory that magic is woven with words, always....:)

person Manda The Witch
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! Jareth smoochies. I love Jareth smoochies. As you can tell. And your very smart because as you said you wouldn't turn down Jareth smoochies. This is soooo good. I mean cake mix ice cream good. You should update real quick. That way there are more cake mixy goodness of Jareth smoochies... that didnt make sense. Oh well, thats why your the author. Well quick more Jareth smoochies, Please!!!
person Alesun
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! *is a happy alesun* The dancing was so sweet, I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person nights
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you always make me want to read more and more.
wonderful development.
love it!
person Alesun
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* Why haven't you updated yet???? Pleeeeeeease update soon!!
person Icia
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! that was great! I love it! that's the best labyrinth fic I've ever read! update update!!
person aimless
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10, Wow! is it hot in hor ior is it just me? LOL. Very well written and very erotic. Good grief sarah is being a tad reluctant, what resolve. Ah well that makes her more of a challenge and we all know Jareth loves a challenge. ;) Keep up the excellent work. I am positively dying for the next chapter. Once again the Mistress has posted and her fans are appreciative.
person Alesun
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, well as much as I hate to say this I think I can wait. I can be suprisingly patient when I need to be. But if you make me wait too long I just want you to know that I'm not to be held responsible for my actions. I look foward to the next chapter.