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Oh no doubt they're quite interesting, particularly to anyone who might happen to see one and get the wrong impression. I suppose I could lock the finished thing away in the bottom of some dark drawer and never share, but what fun is that. Better to keep him presentable and let everyone enjoy, prudes and pervs alike. Though reading this chapter again, I may wear down my determination on the issue.

AWWWW!!!!!! I feel sooo important. Thats so sweet. Well, hurry up i want more jareth smoochies. Well i mean for sarah, although if you offered ME Jareth smoochies I wouldn't pass it up*wink wink*hahahaha. Well hope to see a lil more real soon.

Back again, just deciding I'd leave you a little note!

I am swimming in impressment (is that even a word?) at your ability to update on your promised schedule with such impressive, well thought-out chapters. Never have I been able to pull that off (frequent updates; yes. Content? No) and I admire you greatly for it. I love how the story is slowly taking shape, developing this new "grown up" Sarah to someone that we can all sympathize with. That takes real talent, and that's a talent that you definitely have.

I know you probably don't need to hear this again, but keep up the good work! I know there are a lot of us out there who love to visit every other evening for a nice, fresh new chapter.

Thanks,
Another Daily Reader

Again, I'm astounded. Your work is revolutionary. Again, keep up the great writing. I'm hooked! I'm glad that Sarah has determined what she wants from Jareth, so I guess it's up to him to figure that out ;)

love it! its pure magic andI love how their both dealing with newfound feelings, makes for a lovlie sexual tension if I do so so myself.

That was so...so touching. I really liked it a lot. They're very IC, and I still like what you're doing with Sarah. But that ending is...wow...*wipes away a tear* that was beautiful.

Ever,
~Melantha

Pleased as I am that Sarah sh suc such self restraint, I don't understand HOW. The seduction scene (notice I didn't preface that with "attempted" because Sarah really was thoroughly seduced, even if she did make a clean get away thanks to the timer) was incredibly subtle and beautifully written; I reread it again just to enjoy the choice of words and structuring of his little monolgue. I hope I can write just like you when I grow up! (Next time I write a Draco/Hermione scene I am rereading this story for inspiration and something to aspire to!) Oh, no. Now the dreaded two day wait for an update. *sigh*

Dear Goddess, you update fast. *legcling* THANK YOU!
*ahem* as for the chap review
I really like how they're interacting (STILL! ^_~). And the things Jareth said...mm.....*swoon*
I'm rooting for him to realize that he needs to shelve his big fat book called PRIDE and start actually putting some LOVE in that Lust...but it looks like he's gonna, ^_^ Please read my story...yes that's singular.... I'm trying so hard to write a Laby fic but...gah...can't come up with plot....*bangs head on table* nuh nuh nuh! I need plot bunnies! Plot bunnies that will give me complete plots, not half-arsed ones! *is angrysad*
I wish I could write a complete story....*sigh**sobs*

Anyway...I love you, you are my riterite author. *hug*

~Melantha

Grr...right at the good part to! Update!

Hmm..well then. I wonder what shall happen when he finds out she's still a virgin. Interesting. Updated soon plz.