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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Alesun
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to mention something in my last post. You keep supplying the yummy Jareth goodness, and I'll keep reviewing to my little heart's content. Sound good to you?
person Alesun
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This is such a wonderful story. Please update soon.
person mathilde
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And once again, the tables are turned. It'll be amusing to see if Jareth uses this to further his Grand Plan of Seduction, or if he lets his pride steal the show, thus dashing his fine planning and impure intentions.
person LaRoseNoire
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, you have no idea how happy it makes me to see an new chapter waiting for me - especially when it revolves around one of my favourite mystery novels. (Sort of a twofer, as it were.) Methinks it is time to reread it again! I do hope Jareth will soon get around to realizing that the attraction isn't all one sided; how can he be so immune to the lovely Sarah's charms!?!
person Ann
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're forgiven because you wrote a lovely chapter. But I didn't get to bed until Midnight! I was so busy reading your other stories. I didn't even get my toast, just went right to the next story. Forgive me for notiewiiewing them seperately, they deserve it, but I'm lazy. I went out to rent Labyrinth tonight, but they don't have it where I live. So...probably won't be seeing it until August at least when I move back home. I have your stories to console me though. I'm really impressed the way the timelines and explanations are different for this and your other chapter fic. Sarah and Jareth are the same people in both stories, but the story that surrounds them is very different with very different explanations. Whenever I've tried to do that, the lines tend to blur. So congratulations.
person Angelynn
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are such a good writer!

Im pining, you dont update quick enough......*I want more*!!!!
person Manda The Witch
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good stoory and i can't wait til the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

person Kae Noel
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh boy now things are getting interesting.... as if they weren't before... Hey, I've got a really cool Labyrinth Wallpaper i made if you'd like I could send you the file
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
http://www.deviantart.com/view/4815954/ There you go, as promised. Smaller view available by clicking the button beneath it furthest to the right. Not quite oils, sadly, but good enough for now. Someday I'll do the boy justice.

Had I not started before this fic began, I'd have put him in Armani. That image is taunting me, and I'm trying to resist it. Eagerly awaiting what kind of story you come up with next.
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Link test And if it doesn't work, oh well.