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by scatteredlogic

person MelanthaNocturne
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yes!! I love this story! And the fact that you expanded on the world of the Labyrinth...gah! and the Fae! *applause* *glomp* I love you now, savvy?

Regards!
~Melantha

P.S. Who wants to join my Jareth-harem?? C'mon, you know you wanna!! ^_~
person Ann
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Scatteredlogic, I do believe I hate you. See, I was just clicking through some recced fic from another author that caught my eye when I stumbled across this. I haven't even SEEN Labyrinth in years and years. And now I'm going to have to go rent it tommorrow I'm sure. And check back here obsessively for updates. It's dinner time and I haven't gotten my hair cut or gone out to buy kerosene for my heater and it's all your fault! Excellent fic. Now I go make toast and start reading your other stories. Dammit.
person Kae 3¨ Õ
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwhahahahaha, good job Sarah! Heh.... the ly gly gifts that came along with that interesting bit of information ought to prove interesting as well. ^_^
person Menagerie
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I'm cus aus as to how Sarah is going to get out of this one...and loved the 'caramel sauce' comment. I enjoy your writing style very much; descriptive and well balanced without being overly wordy.

And I haven't worked out how to format stuff on here either!
person AngelicDevil
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!! Must have more! Write more now! UPDATE FOR LOVE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE WOMAN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please?
person mathilde
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! *dies* I was waiting for Jareth to find the paintings... and this is just TOO perfect. But I must say, however wonderful and amazing your fic is... it can't possibly be worth the maddening need to read more of it! It's like I've just found the most wonderful story in the entire library-- but they only let me read a few pages a day. And it's driving me crazy because I know the really good part hasn't even come yet, but it's somewhere just a few pages ahead, and then... Gah!! They make me stop reading!

Then again, maybe it really IS worth it... *grins* If it wasn't, the wait wouldn't make me nearly as batty.
person Alesun
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is gonna be good I can tell. And thanks for updating so quickly. *is a happy panda*
person star_of_chaos
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story :)
person Lady Hoshi
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you and bless you for updating so frequently. Reading your stories is a real pleasure. Your writing flows so well and your characters are true to the movie and complete.
person Anna
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! He found out. Poor Sarah. He was going to find out eventually I suppose. I'm interested in finding out what Jareth's other questions will be. Also Sarah will probably end up telling him because he'll trick her into telling him some way shape or form. I am really looking forward to reading what will happen next. Please keep up the wonderful work, and update soon.