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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person BJ
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story! I can't wait to see what you write next!!! :-)
person mathilde
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Firstly -- brilliant. As usual. Secondly.... POOR SARAH! I feel her pain. Down here in Boston it's absolutely freezing. And um. Gah. I go to a catholic school where those damn nuns make us wear kilts. All the bloody time. And if you think it's cold outside in New England, try being outside in a kilt... *cough* Anyhow. I guess I'll have to forgive you this time for not updating every day. *grins*
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure he does. Can't wait to read the rest.
person Dushu Maxwell
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*drools* I'm waiting for the next chapters.. those are really good. Your portrayal is amazing. I watch Labyrinth almost everyday. I know thats sad and pathetic, but hey, the music is amazing. I am a musician and am absolutly in love with what David Bowie did with those songs. I also wouldn't mind dancing to him singing, but I could handle drooling over someone else...anyway, rock on. You did wonderfully.
person LaRoseNoire
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when I found two new chapters. (Alas, they go so quickly!) I am thoroughly enjoying this story and love the way it is shaping up. (Thank God Jareth ended up in Armani; I was scared there for a minute, envisioning him shopping at KMart.) I will be checking back frequently for updates. Keep up the good work!
person Mags
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read your stuff before, on FF.net and as usual, your stories are exceptional. I knew immediately, when I saw the name 'Scattered Logic' that I would immediately be sucked into the story from the moment I started reading, and was even reluctant to start reading just because I knew I'd be up as late as would be needed to finish reading as far as I could. Please, keep up the excellent wo I' I'd love to read more.
person mathilde
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Absoluetly boody brilliant. You have such a talent. I've read everything you have posted here. Now lets hope you get back into the habit of updating once a day...*grins* Because I'm going to die in the in-between-update times. Gah! ::fizzes and dies as an example as to what will happen::
person Alesun
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue this fanfic. This has to be one if not the best one I've ever read. Keep up the good work.
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jareth. Glad to see he's not quite *such* an ass anymore...for now. :p
person KaeNoel
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! another lovely Labyrinth fic! You are sucha great writter, more soon please!