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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person S'Powie
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Wonderfully written, you managed to create a backstory for Jareth and the Labyrinth without ever going there. I admit I am a sucker for happy endings and stereotypical plot devices used well; and you did use the 'near death crystallization of feelings' particularly nicely. Personally I don't think anything else would get through to His Tightness anyway. Which comes to another point - the characters. Again superb characterization of Jareth and a realistic Sara. My only regret is not "seeing" their wedding and what the goblins did to the Labyrinth in Jareth's absence.
person phebe
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. you're a talented author. you're other fics are great!
person LadyLunarian
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can proudy say this is the best Labyrinth fanfiction I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful fan-fiction, it's truly wonderful, I can only hope to write something as lovely as this someday.

Best Wishes, LadyLunarian.
person Holly
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oddly enough, I had a gay uncle named Gary who died of AIDS. For real.
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this fic as a link on DM.net I must tell you that this is quite possibly the most captivating Labyrinth fic I've ever had the pleasure to read! Each chapter was masterfully written. They drew me into your version of a very believable aftermath for one of my all time favorite movies. I always felt like Jareth had truly loved her, or felt something anyway, at the end of the movie and I felt that it was completely unfair ,^_~, the way it ended. I was very intrigued to read your version of Jareth's feelings and what was going on. I love the way you tied everything together and how you still captured the very real escence of the characters. It literally felt like I had just thrown in the movie, watched it, and got to see the suprise sequel film hiding on the end of the tape. Kudos for a brilliant piece!
~NekuYasha
P.S. The epilouge of a wedding might have been a nice touch. ^_^
person A Nonny Mouse
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh, I just spent the vast majority of my night reading this....damn you're good.
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really good! I was so into it that I couldn't stop read it!
Is the story finish or do u going to write some more?
If you are then please let me know. :)
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also, could e-mail me so I know that you update the story?
person Jessie
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know which story I like better, Enticement or Necessary? It's a tough one...let's just leave it @ you're an awesome writer and I totally can't wait to read anything more that you write.
person TheGirlWhoLovesHim
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this...overall a beautifully crafted tale...