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Absolutely Amazing. I offer cookies and puppies up in your name.

I absolutelt LOVED this story! Jareth is so erotic and cool. My favorite part was when he tried to seduce her without touching her... I know I wouldn't have lasted very long under those...conditions. This is remarkably well written. It is rare indeed to find a fanfic of this caliber. This one has an original plot to boot! Props to you, m'dear!

.....Holy fuck.
I'm speechless.
Just...wow.
Incredible.
Utterly incredible.
Never stop writing.
Ever.

This story is my favorite. i've read it 10 times last week. lol I'm glad you edited! Although I'd love to see the wedding and how Sarah becomes a Fae or something. Are you going to be updating?

♥ Bri

I loved it! I hope you do a sequel.

Going on my favorites. Wow, that was so good! ^_^ I hope you have a sequel!

I just flicked over to your profile after enjoying this fic immensely and saw The Best Revenge, thought, score, judging by The Enticement, I've found one of the rare good HGLM fics...and realised it was one of the stand-out fics that I found when I first started reading the pairing. Off to look at your other stuff!

I have read a ridiculous amount of fanfiction in my time, by authors who did well and authors who did not. This story was, in my opinion, extremely well done, and dare I even THINK it, realistic. I am a big fan of the Labyrinth, in fact I have the rather embarrassing honor to be the only person I know who actually conducted not one, not two, but SEVEN count 'em SEVEN imaginary marriages of myself to the Goblin King, in front of my parents and siblings no less (was that a run on sentence?). Thus I have very strict ideas about how the Goblin King should be treated in fanfiction. You did a wonderful job with my Jareth, and I very much enjoyed your portrayal. Jareth as CHILD-LIKE??? I loved the idea! Hey, I seem to remember some mention of a sequel?? I would definitely read it!! If you do decide to do a sequel, please email me! Anyway, I want to offer my congratulations on a job well done! I wish you had shown what Jareth did to the Labyrinth as punishment, but how often do wishes come true? *giggle* Congrats again!

I must say that this is on of the best fics I have read in a while. I would like to give you my compliments on your knowledge of the old teachings. The fact that you knew about the Fae surprised me. The fact that you knew that iron is deadly to them, was even more of a shock. But back onto topic... the plot was very good. Most of the Sarah/Jareth stories are either waaaaaaaaaaaaay too sappy, or they just don't make sence. This one has none of that. The one critism I have is that, every once in a while there are places that are just jiberish. I think you need to have someone proof read it and then edit it. But all in all a very good story.


Ciao!

Such an excellent story!