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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Danu
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, couldn't stop reading once I started. My only wish is that it would have kept going :o)
person Erin
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*crying* I loved this fic!!! It made me cry during those hard times and yet held onto the belief that love exists. Thank you sooooooo much for writing this. Now then, is that the end? Or can a final chapter where Jareth and Sarah return to the Underground and meet up with Sarah's old freinds? Either way, it's a great fic.
person Armydoc1
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is "WOW"

Great story any chances of a part Two (the first cristmas/wedding in the goblin vilage???)

Adam Saris
person Nathalia
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU WRETCHED MISBEGOTTEN SPAWN OF A (insert name)!!!

I hate Cliffhangers! Did you have to stop at that particular moment!?!?

*calming herself down*
This is one of the best stories I have read. Please keep up the good work.
person GenesisEve a.k.a Lasher
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well this too qui quite a bit of time to read. Kept me occupied for half the day yesterday that's for sure, although i can only imagine how much of that time was spent trying to get a new chapter to load wit hall the traffic this site gets. But it was worth the trouble, and i enjoyed myself. I remember a friend telling me she read some good stories on here of the Labyrinth months ago, but i just never thought of going to search for them. So when i read your story this weeked, it surprised to see her name until i remembered. *chuckles* I'll have to have her beat it into me next time she says she's read a good labyrinth story so i'll go and check it out a little sooner than i had here. *Shrugs* Any how, i loved the story, and the whole idea was very good and unique, i like that combination. Nice job.
person Kasey
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u should so make a sequel...
person Ashleigh
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK... It's five o'clock in the morning and all I have to say is Girl You Can Write(hopey yoy you're a girl ^_~)!!!! This fic Kicks asss!!! Is there going to be a sequel???? You know have her meet all of his acquaines??es?????? Anyways, your a really, I mean a really talented author. I can't wait to read what else you come up with.
person A.H.Smith
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fantastic. Truly tasteful and erotic at the same time. Not many can manage that. And *thank you* for putting Jareth into those amazing pants of his again :-D ;-) I loooove the 80's hehe.
person lacewing
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
will there be another story? I love your labraryth stories, mixing so much of actaual old stories and tales into things and expandon ton the charactors. Their emotions and responces to eachother and other things. Jareth's protrailal.. so much the Sidhe king ^_^ What I would except of the seele court (and since I read through one story from 9 last night till 6:30 and then read through this one and it's now 2... DEAR GOD I NEED SLEEP.....

I got my e-mail do if you think about it let me know if you submit another story.
person Lady Shiva
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aat aat a lovely, lovely story. a bit sad to see it end. You really must email me if you ever decide to do a sequel =>