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by scatteredlogic

person batcavemonkey@aol.com
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The wait for the end was well worth it. I had no doubt in my mind that the story's ending would be just as good as the rest of the piece. You are an excellent writer and I hope you continue to write wonderful stories of any and all ratings. I wish there were words to express how much I admire not only your stideaideas but your way with words, however there aren't, so I'll leave it all at what I've written. In the immortal words of... I have no clue WHO said it... Rock on, Scattered Logic. Just Rock On.

Signed,
Mags
person Isadore
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I admit that I haven't reviewed until now, even though I've been reading your WONDERFUL story since chapter one... But I'm a bad, bad person - what else can I say?

Well, here's something - I can understand no plans for a sequel, but if you don't continue writing fics, I'll cry until the end of my days, for lack of your amazing talent. I will! Just watch me!
person BJ
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this story from beginning to end. You have a real talent for writing. I really got hook on this fanfic, I hope to find a sequel to this eventually. Thanks for sharing your story!
person Manda The Witch
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two days is too long to wait for something this important. But Its over. ;-( NOOOOO!!! I loved this tory it was sooooo good
Anyway you should write another. I liked the way you portrayed Jareth and well fresh Jareth smoochies would be nice. Well Thanx for an excelent story and hope to see more from you soon.
person Kitrazzle Fayn
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily* I'm so glad you've put this up here. I had read it when you had it on Fanfiction.net, but I'd forgotten how wonderful a story it is. All the delightful twists and cliffhangers and little tidbits, all wrapped up with the perfect ending. *le sigh* Perfect...
person Raven
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, I bee been reading it chapter by chapter and eagerly awaiting each new posting. I love what you don done with the characters, it is believable and very original. I hope you decide to continue with another story using these characters, a sequel hopefully :). Thank you for the wonderful story and may the muses inspire your keyboard and pen in the future.
Raven
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person Alesun
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely beautiful story!!! And the NC-17 bits were just so well done and breathtaking. I couldn’t even tell you how long I was waiting for those and I’m pleased to say that you didn’t disappoint. The ending was so charming and adorable; I just loved everything about it. Your skills as a writer astound me and I can't wait for you to start in on another story (and I hope you will because now that this is complete I’ll have nothing to read). Would it be possible to convince (or bribe) you into writing a sequel?????
person Talene
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a beautiful story luv! I enjoyed it so very much!! Thank you for writing it. I have an idea for a Labrynth story,BTW, but have no iea how to go about it. Having lost Sara...he comes to this world for some reason and becomes either a rock start or movie star. Is far-fetched but the plot bunny is persistant and won't leave me be. Perhaps you can do something with it. :) I can't. Thank you again for the tale. T'were beautifully wrought!
person Adrienne
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The latest chapter is brilliant, and thanks so much for the hints about the David Bowie concert. Did you know a Labyrinth Collector's Edition is out. It cost me 50$, but I bought it out of Bowie-love, lol. You had to end with a cliffhanger, though :-P...now I will be checking for an update like mad.
person Goblin Princess
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a question, in one of your earlier chapters, Sarah told Jareth that she just wanted someone to love her. Was that what the Laberynth was granting her, or was it only, as Jareth so charmingly put it, 'erotic fantesies'?
Would you care to define 'deal with' in accordance to what Jareth is planning for the Laberynth? It does not sound very promising, does it?