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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Evelyn
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I suppose 'all's well that ends well'. It is a good stand-alone fic. Hope you're planning on writng more! An excellent story, this one was. Nice work.
person Melantha
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing this story. It means a lot to me and I enjoyed it immensely.

You are the first fanfiction author I have followed this extensively through a story and I am very glad to have 'met' you.

Your talent is amazing and your abilty is masterful. I am thankful to you for sharing that Gift with us.

Thank you,
~Melantha

ff.net/~melanthanocturne
aff.net - ditto
person Kae Noel
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs contentedly* now that, was a love story I won't quickly forget, thanks *hugs* you're awesome!
person LaRoseNoire
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes, yes, yes! It's all coming out now! (Okay, Sarah had to die to get h but but hey, she didn't STAY dead and she gets the guy - um, fae - in the end, so it was worth it, right?) Lovely handling of The Revelations (the hyperventilation scene was wonderful, a deft mix of humour and pathos), and I find your incarnation of The Labyrinth extremely interesting.

I'm so sorry to see this story wrapping up. I'll miss it.
person aimless
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! What a cruel place to end that last chapter. ;) You torture us so, heh, heh. Well no help for it I guess we'll just have to wait breathlessly for the next installment. Great chapter, wonderful story.
person anonymous
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter! please update as soon as you can.
person me
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you´re so mean. Yet another cliffie. I just love your story. The romance, the bickering, the sexual tension *sigh*. I hope you update tomorrow.
person Anotherherosangl
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU very much for e-mailing me. I love your story. Most stories on adultfanfiction.net have no plot. your plot is amazing
person Alesun
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! *screams like a fan-girly* I can't wait to hear Sarah's answer to that one. You've done a wonderful job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update quickly please. *is a happy, happy panda*
person Alesun
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! *screams like a fan-girlie* I can't wait to hear Sarah's answer to that one. You've done a wonderful job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update quickly please. *is a happy, happy panda*