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for The Enticement

by scatteredlogic

person Alesun
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GASPS* That has got to be the best chapter you've written so far. I'm still speechless, well kind of. I can't believe Sarah died, at least for a little bit. I can't wait to find out what happens next. And I'm glad you enjoyed your trip.
person Melantha
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD! *explodes* /\____________________________________________/\
person sita
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I check everyday to see if a new chapter is up because I really think this is a special story! I've meant to review earlier than this but keep getting side tracked. After reading some of your other stories as well, I'm glad I happened upon you! Keep it up and thanks for updating so frequently, thats so refreshing.
person aimless
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH! What a chapter! Ink ynk you have truley outdone yourself! I think some more bowing to the mistress of the labyrinth are in order. I was blown away. OOh and I am still jealous that you got to see THE MAN in concert, I wanted to go so bad but my car was simply not up to the 7 hour drive nor was my pocketbook ;) I'm glad you had a good time hon, and so till next time keep up the excellent work ;)
Peace,
Amy
person Thing1
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story!! I can't believe I didn't realize this category was here at AFF!! I am very much looking forward to seeing Sarah's reaction to Jareth after the accident. I also like how their relationship is evolving. It's not just a "you're cute let's shag!!". These characters have feelings and thoughts. Hehe, I'll bet they are rather hard to handle on your end. :) I'm looking forward to more from you.

Thing1
person Manda The Witch
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! You're back oh goody! See i knew david Bowie was as sexy as ever hehehehe! Too bad you catch some BOwie smoochies huh? Thanx for being so quick with the chapter, and don't worry about us reviewers, we can make a deal we won't get mad if youu update really quick(j/k) hehehehe. ANyway glad you had a good trip.
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah....how my heart bled there for a few moments! So very well done!! I bow before the Mistress! Bravo!!
person Evelyn
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I tried reviewing earlier, but my computer was screwed in the process, and I don't really know if it went through the f tim time, so here goes another one:
The suspense was killing me! Another chapter wonderfully written. It really is an amazing story. I hope it won't end! :) Alas, all good things must come to end, but please try and make it as long as possible. Haha, that is if you wouldn't mind. How was the show? And, yes, I agree. A 57 year old Bowie DOES kick ass. Again, nice work, as always.
person Morrigan
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch!
Didn't see that one coming...(I mean the Labyrinth interfering directly, as in giving a much-needed pu Gre Great part...:)
Of course, I'd assume that Jareth would try to exact some kind of revenge on the Labyrinth once he thinks about it all...if it's some kind of symbiotic relationship as it would seem I'd assume he can shape it to some degree...Hmmm, how do you discipline your Labyrinth? Paint it pink for a while? Turn it temporarily into Teletubby-Land *shudder*? Launch a professional decorateur at it ? :)
Okay, I'm aware I don't make too much sense...migraine medicamentation, you know.
But once again, lovely part....

person Adrienne
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really have enjoyed this story very very much, and I will be seeing Bowie live too in March in my hometown. I can't wait until you update with new chapters, and I hope you enjoy seeing David Bowie :-)