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by SeaMonkey

person chayar1991
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is very well done.
person Lisa
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a VERY good way to continue the kissing scene between Abberline and Mary. I like how you took it one step farther than the film, and I also thought it interesting to use the dialogue from the film to put your fic in the proper context for the reader. You also have a wonderful grasp of grammar, and I really like the descriptive words you used in this fic. As a reader, I felt like a fly on the wall observing the events that played out between Abberline and Mary. All in all, it was a sweet and sexy story. Nice work!!!!
person Lisa
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here is one additional point that I forgot in my first review. I LOVE how Mary orders Abberline to "move", and I REALLY LOVE his answering her with "Yes'm". I'm a Southern gal (Georgia born and bred); so, I find that reply adorable as well as totally in character for an English gentleman like Abberline (or for a Kentucky boy like Johnny for that matter). Well now, my review is totally complete even if it was typed in two parts.
person Kimmy
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I haven't found but a handful of 'From Hell' stories that I've liked but this one is one for me to count. I can't wait to read others that you have written!
person Allie
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw so amazing! loved it! kinda said there arn't that many From Hell fics wish there really was alot more. Johnny Depp so hot in this movie!
person MmC
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There should be more From Hell fics..i liked this one and Johnny Depp is just so damn hot in this movie!
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, there is not much From Hell fanfics (i wrote one :\)
and this one is very very very good, write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee stuff like that! it was great.
Abberline is pure sex.