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for Trouble in Paradise

by Jade1x2

person leann
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! it was an awesome beginning--youre gonna write more,, right??? please! i love jack and will together
person NEWENIT
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jade....this is such a fantastic fic....I CANNOT WAIT FOR IT TO CONTINUE!!

This is some damned hot stuff, and I am anxious for the "deed" itself....

NEWENIT
person Mahie
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic. Funny how we read always the same pairings, the same situations, but sometimes there's a way to write that turn even the common things original. Thank you. I hope you update this fic soon. Can't wait to read them making love!! I just adore Jack/Will, more and more !!!
person Night
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you're planning on continuing this!!! I like it a lot, and man where ya left off just screams of more to come!! Please don't dissapoint!!! It's really good
person Lizzie
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story keep up the great work
person Sarryn
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is an interesting sense of naivete in your will. Quite charming, really. I am most impressed with your literary skills. I would be quite happy to read more of this story.
person MahieSparrow
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice fic. Please continue! i want to know what happens to Jack and Will! Thanks!
person Karen
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic Jade, I hope theres more coming soon.
person Julie
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting (good)...nice idea for a story, and it seems to flow nicely. UPDATE SOON!!!