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for Change in the House of Flies

by Sarryn

person LadyJanelly
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I followed this fic over from Fanfic.net, and it was worth it, even for one more chapter. Please do continue, it's a wonderful piece of art.
person jillij
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happened? * whimpers * I was perusing your stories and I fell in love with this one. What happened to the summer and updating a whole ton? * looks at you with puppy dog eyes * I would love to know what happens when Jack finds out his poor Will has been...can't say it! You horrible, horrible little person! I love you! But I may have to come after you if I don't find out what happens.

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person Sabrina451
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I bet they cut off his penis! Am i right? Poor Will. That would suck. Literally, in some cases.

Anyway..update!!!!!!!!
person Xoie
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I jusnishnished chapter one and I'm about to go on bu tI just couldn't before telling you that I am in awe of your ability with words and agree whole heartedly with Jack about a good conversation. Thank you for writing this incredable story.
person Xoie
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic. I desperately need to know what Will is thinking all this time. Just to show you the trust I have in your working with this story I desided it had to be a dream before we were told. I knew you wouldn't do that to us. (If that made any sence). Keep writing I am fasinated
person kirameki
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I reviewed on another site as thesilentsenshi. Just wanted to reaffirm how much I love this story and hope for an update soon. XD I adore your style and originality.
Eagerly waiting for more,
Stephie P.
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining. It brings me amusment. I do hope you continue because I am rather hopeful that there is more. It intrigues and amases. I do like where this is going. I hope to see more! ^ ^ -nicepiratehat
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I did reply twice... Three times because I do enjoy this story a lot. Please continue soon!
person nicepiratehat
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amasing. I do hope you continue soon. I've been up until 12:21 at night reading this and find that dispite the blurry vision and constant yawning, I did press on. Thank you for creating such a nice piece. However, as much as I do enjoy it, my only comlaint is that I was very confused when Jack was dreaming. It took me a moment after to realize what had happened. But besides that, I have no complaints. I can't wait to read and review the next chapter. I await! -NicePirateHat
person Nishia
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying this series and can't wait to find out what happens next.

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