rate_review Reviews

I am so freakin' absorbed in this story, it's scary!

*ahem*

Yeah, well...I just have so many questions that I don't want to ask because I KNOW that they'll be answered later, because of course they're basic questions like is Will confused or freaking out about Jack or what, but don't answer that. I don't want to know! I want to read!

So that means that you must write! PLEASE!? *begs*

Loveses you forever if you keep writing! I love your style and the dark theme of the entire story.

I especially liked the way you described Will grabbing Jack's hands and forcing him to just mold against him. I could actually see that happening!

WAI!

I hope you update soon! You are awesome-er, and I hope that I can read more of this fantastic story.

Elvey-san

*sigh* wonderful as usual. i just can't get ove ryour command of the english language...you weave it beautifully. I don't mind waiting long periods for stuff of this quality...that's not to say that ildn\ldn't object if you did post more often though :D

If this story is what your imagination can create, I think you should cont to to let it control your free will when writing. As much as I would love to see more frequent updates, your chapters are always well worth the wait. Thank you.

I have to hand it to you, this is really good. A very enthralling story. I must confess I find your prose style a bit ornate for my tastes, more so than your other work, which seem to have just the right tone. Anyway, a lot better than most of the stuff out there.

Hey, I like this one!!! The style changes a little, and at sometimes is difficult to follow, but it is very well written and interesting!!! I really hope you continue, and I'm really iesteested as to what Jack just plans on doing to get Will out of his depression, as well as informing us of the complete story of Will's tragedy and why he refuses to return home!!! Please keep writing!! And thanks for responding to my last review!!

So far, an absolutely fascinating, enchanting story. I eagerly await its continuation.

May your life always be touched with the same loveliness you have given to this work.

Dude...i normally read and comment on this on LJ but i saw the update here first and OMG!!!! you don't disappoint!!! i've been wondering what was happening with this fic and was overjoyed that you've updated. The mood you manage to create is just so horrible that it's beautiful (i swear that's a compliment!!) and it makes me want to cry.
That paragraph about the prints of the murdered children made me recoil and shudder and was perfect!!!!
Hope real life isn't giving you too much of a hassel, i know how much it can interfere with writing!!!
Update soon because it's wonderful!

That was a really good chapter. I was wondering when you would update. Thanks! ^__^ Great story.

Ah, Sarryn my sweet! You have here my favorite story. You truly must contin.I c.I check daily for updates, and earteart hitched when I saw that you'd finally had time to do so! Please PLEASE continue soon.

Hellborne

Once again, lovely. Very interesting slow build which really deepens your characters. I can't wait to see what you do with this.