rate_review Reviews

Lovely as usual. I like the slow build of your character. It makes the fathoms deep and they need that.

Amazing, simply amazing. The sheer brilliance of your writing just takes my breath away. (*whew!*) The darkness and the language make this into one of the most beautifully crafted fics I've ever read. I like my humor, and the lighthearted cast to PoTC was certainly enjoyable, but both in my reading and my writing I find it more interesting to explore the darker side of a fandom, especially one that is usually seen as happy-go-lucky and comical. This fic explores that dark side *wonderfully*, and it makes me a pleasantly fuzzy little rabbit. Ah, the loverliness of stumbling across gold nuggetses of fanfics! (Hey, what can I say; I live for my imagination. ^.^) *slinks off to study for psychology, which is really what she should have been doing in the first place, but that's certainly not as much fun as procrastinating, now is it?*

Absolutely amazing, that's what you are.
You're truly one of the most talented writers I have ever encountered and I just want to thank you for sharing this story. I will gladly keep reading it for as long as you bless us with updates. I'll probably keep reading the existing chapters even after you stop updating, although I hope that doesn't happen until the story's finished.
Thank you.

Amazing really, how I can read through a description of Jack gutting someone like a fish and not bat an eye, but when it comes to chiseling off a finger I get queasy. *shrug*
Ah well, fantasticly written as always, it's become my habit to update my stories then look and see if any of my recs have been updated, and lo and behold, there was this fantastic /fantastic/ chapter.
As always, I eagerly await the next installment, and I've got an extra set of batteries for the Fount of Creativity, should you need them.

Yes i thought the previous chapter (while still intriguing and stomach turning in an erudite way) was not up your usual standards. I did enjoy it though have no doubts.

I loved this chapter. A startilingly realistic way of how the humind ind deals with the aftermath of a trauma, and both players completly in character. :)

Good stuff!

great update!!! This is an excellent story. So Jack saw that Will lost his ring finger and Will said that was the first I wonder if Jack will figure it out without Whavihaving to directly tell him. Or at least suspect anyways. I hope Will gets back to himself somewhat I mean he is still alive after all. I know it is a man thing to be worried about what happened but he could still be a pirate and husband and father too (would just have to adopt) Have him ask Anamaria if she needs that to be a good pirate just make sure he ducks the flying slap afterwards or gets a good head start on running. *LOL* Again great story update soon.

*pouts*

Jack: *looks panicked* Nononono! Don't you start!! *hides behind Will*

Will: *looks around wildly for some tissues*

Elven: *cries softly and themps mps up onto the table and shouts* I'M NOT WORTHY!!!

Jack: *eeps and falls under the table*

Will: *hands her box of tissues when she sits down on the edge of the table and lets her feet swing* *wipes her eyes tenderly*

Elven: *cradling Will's hand* You poor dear!!!

Jack: *sneaks up behind Will and wraps his arms around the sm's w's waist*

Will: *pouts and lets himself be comforted by Jack and Elven*

Elven: I feel so bad for Will!!! >__< Stupid f**kers!! I'm going to f**king kill every f**ker that hurt my William!!! *jumps up glomps Will and Jack*

Jack: *huggles Will and kisses his hands*

Elven: AHHH!!! I LOVED THE UPDATE IT WAS AWESOME, AND I WANT YOU TO UPDATE AGAIN AS SOON AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE!!!!!! *glomps you*

*puts French beret on Will's head*

Remember! Sexy is using a feather, kinky is using the whole chicken!

Elven: O__o?????

Will: O__o????

Jack: O__o?????

Don't mind the rantings. I love the story, I feel sorry for Will, and I hope Jack seduces Will!

Will: *scowls and goes back to swordsmithing*

Jack: *pouts when Will stops paying attention to him*

Elven: *shrugs sympathetically*

Ta!

Elven

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Oh crap...you're going to try and cheer me up, aren't you?

The only problem I have with your next selection is that it is too short!!!! I mean, you just keep making it more thrilling and addictive every addition and it makes it even more difficult to wait for the next chapter!!! So if you'd be so kind as to get the next one out "PRONTO" I'd be very greatful!! Okay, I love how you show what happened to Will through flashback, very nice touch, and that you make Jack understanding. Now the only problem again, is that you've left us hanging with just a snip of information and a craving for more, so from a loyal reader, help us out?!!! K?!!! Please, keep wrtiting!!!

Lovely, well written. I can't wait to see more. I can guess what the injury is... Poor Will.

Need more. MUCH MUCH more. Magnificent! Please go on.