rate_review Reviews

I like how your drawing out the revelation of Will's past. Your writing actually keeps me coming back, when I'd give up on a story and wait to skip ahead. The tension and emotion is great, keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Green is cool...

Oh...

Eep!!

*squees*

I feel like an idiot...is that okay? I thought at first that Will had died. *winces and smacks forehead*

OH! And I'm glad that you like my reviews...*warm fuzz*...I feel so special! *squees again*

Jack: *whaps her with a pillow* You're actin all...-(*grimaces as he does a vague gesture*)-

Will: *sulking in corner* Flippity?

Jack: *snaps fingers* Tha's the one!

Elven: *scowls at the smith and pirate* I hate you guys so much right now...*pouts*

Jack: *grins innocently* No, you don't. You ~love~ me!

Elven: *holds up finger* Correction. I love you screwing him -(*points to Will*)- silly. Savvy?

Will: *rolls eyes from his perch in the corner*

Elven: *grins broadly*

Jack: *scowls* I don't appreciate you stealing my lines, lass...(*growls*)

Elven: *smiles sweetly, flips him the bird and gets hit by a pillow* Bite me, pirate.

Jack: *bites her arm*

Elven: *yelps* What the hell!? *grabs arm*

Will: *narrows eyes* I'm leaving...*stalks off into other room*

Jack: Will! I'm sorry, I didn't mean it! C'mon honey!

Will: *storms back into room and points finger at Jack* Don't you 'honey' me!

Jack: *eyes cross to see Will's finger* Sorry! I-I'm no good with words, you know this! Will! *winces as Will turns on heel and slams the door behind him* Tha's not good, is it?

Elven: *shakes head sympathetically* 'Tis okay...

Jack: *sighs* Anything you want to say to the author besides these 'humorous' rantings?

Elven: Oh! You're right!

Jack: -(*mutters*)- You don't have to sound so surprised...*grumbles*

Elven: ANYWAYS! I really, Really, REALLY like the story! Such an amazing plot, and so original! I love the whole Angsty!Will and the whole Jack likes Will -that- way, but not Bill. I just always thought that Bill and Jack and then Jack and Will was a little TOO awkward...*sigh* Don't mind my rantings too much...*sighs again*

Jack: OH, and she just wanted to say that she LOVES your story!

Elven: *pushes Jack out of her chair in front of the computer* EXTREMELY!!!!! AHH! *squeals and faints again*

Jack: And she -(*points to the prone Elven*)- wants you to update as soon as possible, savvy?

Elven: And green is cool!

Jack: O__o????

Elven: She said that did the chapter in green pen...

Jack: *falls down anime-style* Hopeless!

Elven: *innocent expression like Will* What? Green is cool...*shrugs*

Jack: Just finish it up...*sighs*

Elven: Okay! ^__^

I lurve it to death! And yes, I am very enthuasitic, but COME ON! It's an amazing story! I have REASON!

~Ta!~

Elvey-san

^V^V^V^V^V^V^V^

~Oh crap, you're going to try and cheer me up, aren't you?~

Cool I read the first parts this morning and whe when I came back there was an update that is so great. This is a good story I can't wait until Jack finds out about Will's injury *whatever it is* I have a pretty good idea. Well post more soon please

Sounds interesting please update again soon.

I felt that your writing was excellent in its vocabulary, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I do hope that you continue to write this because I am looking forward to reading more...

~SilentOne~

no you evil evil person. why do you leave it there? please post more soon!!! i'm an impatient kinda person...it can't belpedlped

I feel so dumb when I read this story.

Your vocabulary is insane! It's like watching a Woody Allen movie lol. But I'm still curious as to what's to become of the duo. What happened to Will, is he disfigured or worse. I don't know what else to say. I'm hooked!

I'm intrigued, please continue. Demonic Jack is slightly frightening and OOC. Nonetheless, I would like to see where you're going with this.

*does the dance of giddy with joyness* New chapter!

I liked this one too, even without Jack being all murderous and well... bloody insane. Though he's always just as good not murderous and bloody insane. Looking forward to more ^_^

*goes to get new batteries for the fount of inspiration*

Please continue it, soon. It's beautiful, the descriptions are absolutely lurid... and it's obvious you've done some research on the period that you estimate the movie to have been set in order to make the narrative seem more realistic, more authentic. It was a pleasure to read, and I can't wait for more!

~ Jenna.