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Oh darling, you merit every possible compliment ever invented, and more. And I'll gladly keep telling you that if it, in turn, keeps you writing.
Your style is exceptional and the details are very impressive. Carry on.

Whoa! Wonderful story so far, dark and thrilling. Can't wait for more. Please post soon.
Thanks for sharing, Shara Nesu

this is great. I really love the dreamy feel to the story and the way you write Jack. Awsome!

Violent Underscore! Rabbit

Oi! As if you left it there. Puh-lease update soon. That was just too cruel.

I LURVE IT!! GAH!!!

*freaks out because it's so good*

Is it possible that this is one of the coolest stories I've ever read...I THINK SO!!!! *squees and swoons*

This is such a cool fic, and I realize that i'm starting to sound like a crazy fangirl, but I have to freak out else i lose my mind!!!

Just...

WOW.

Amazing, as usual I think.

Elven

Wow!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. I must admit that when I saw that your story had killed off Will and it wasn't even started yet....I didn't plan on reading any further...you see Jack is my favorite character though my pen name Jack4Turner might show that I'm also a big Will Turner fan well truth be told....I was born into the name Turner as it is my last name :) Anyways back to the review...I wasn't really sure that it would be good and all. Because its just so sad to read about Jack mopping around having lost young Will... But wow! Let me tell you when I came into this site looking for new/updated fanfics.l..I decieded to give your another chance....and wow!!!! YOur awesome....wish there was another chr upr up cause I'm going to dye of need between now and then!! i'm dying now to know what is going to happen next....Please hurry with your next posti..I ..I dying to know....HURRY HURRY HURRY!!!!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!

J4T

Your newest fan!!!!

Keep up the excellent work!
:)

Yay, he's back! I was hoping you'd bring him back! It's really really really well written! I love the plot, love the characters, and can't wait to hear more!! You will write some more, right?!!! Please!!! What happened to Will though!?!

Hey! Another Chapter! It made me very happy to see this chapter up. Indeed, we all know who the blacksmith must be, what am am curious to is this: How didcomecome to this new island, when he is supposed to be dead? What WAS the bit sent in the jar to Port Royale? Hmmm. Something to keep me coming back...

I hope to see more soon.

~Desertrain

well done. I really would like to read more, since it appears you intendo too to more. Nicely done. Might have gone with more indepth paragraphs, but thats the college student in me speaking, as I have to write lots. But at least yours has meaning.. i usually bs my way through it unless its something I truley feel for, as it appears to be in this story. GREAT JOB..

Wow, I really loved this. The dark side of Jack is so absolutly believable! I hate how disney makes everything so fuzzy because somewhere in Jack he isnot a fuzzy person, and you drew out that part perfectly. Please write more soon! I want to know what was in that jar