rate_review Reviews

absolutely loved your story and the first one too.

OH HOLY HELL! That was SOOO good! brilliant writing, heart wrenching angst...adorable little boy! keep up the really good work!
(ps i didn't review the first one because i went right into this one and well they were both great and so connected that i reviewed them here. :):D;) bravo)

Aww! So sweet. *sobs* Poor Elizabeth! At least Jack finally got to kill Norrington.

Please, please tell me you ignored that dumb girl from earlier who obviously missed the lessons on manners during kindergarten. As for the fic itself, I don't know how much I have to disagree with you. I can't see how it sucks or isn't well-written. Coming up with a continuing storyline is always difficult, but again, it was well handled. I was equally sad about what happened to Elizabeth in this story as I was with what happened to Will. It's very painful to see how such a strong character can be brought down so far and to their knees. And yet you handled it magnificiently, you made it perfectly believable. I am glad to see that at least Little Will will grow up having a stable family environment as opposed to what he was probably witnessing at home with Norrington. *blinks* I'm going to go wonder about the prospect of pirates being stable family environment now, since it seems so very silly.

I never properly reviewed "Blind Eye" even though I fully enjoyed it and have read it three times already. I'm so thrilled with the sequel and so happy you wrote it. Thank you so much Shara Nesu! Now I hope Melanie reads this, hey Melanie phsyco bitch, litghten up or kiss my lily white ass, you're just jealous of an obvious talent tfar far surpasses your own! Jesus girl, get a life, its just fanfiction, you must be a lot of fun with all these "Rape Will" fics floating around on this site!
Anyway back to Shara, ignore the evidently insane, this work is spectacular and the romance between Jack/Will is passionate and believable (sometimes a challenge with other slash fics). My heart is still fluttering, fabulous!
PS I'm not leaving my penname or email because Melanie a flame y sty stocker!

You fucking bitch! i will keep coming back no matter how often you are going to delete it. Motherfucking whore that you are!

I am most delighted with this continuation of the previous story. You maintain a lovely and quite ethralling voice that lends itself excellently well with the subject of the matter. My sincerest compliments.

Oh I loved it! Dear,how can you say you don't like it? It's really beautiful. Really sweet. Jack and Will are so in love with one aer..er...and now they have a son! ;) Awwww I loved tequeequel. Thanks!