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for Mistakes of the Future

by LaEsmeralda

schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please write more!!!!!!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish there was a way to put stories on alert here. I am liking this so far m'dear

JLB
person cmarie
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter. Writing is good, plot is good, it's all good. I hope you continue this. Thank you.
person ballerina2be
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! I can't wait for the next chapter! This sounds like it has A LOT of potential. Update soon!
person Koda
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, simply great. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Colleen
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going, great start. Thanks for sharing.
person sleepy_angel
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very promising beginning, I can't to see how this story will play out! Anxious to know how they will get away from the police and where they will go! Keep it up, LaEsmeralda! And please don't keep us waiting too long? (^_~)
person sleepy_angel
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Edit: I can't wait to see how this story will play out! See I'm so excited I can't even type! (^_~) LOL!