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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. But one thing that bothers me as a SW expert is the fact that Anakin, a student of the Force, mentions "Gods" on more than one ocassion. Among other things Jedi is a religion, which he's fold fod for 10 years now. In short, in Star Wars there are no gods, only the Force. A Jedi of all people understands this.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Kelly B is at it again! I love love love your work, and have read all of your stuff. Extremely hot, very sensual, just the right amount of dark. Anakin is not the innocent; I love that since most stories tend to portray him as such. The fact that he would manipulate Padme makes sense in his character development. I've been waiting for you to write another story, so thanks for this gift!
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, don't stop now! I've read both "Subcumb" and "the End Justifies the Means" a long time ago (on swats) and was snagged. The way you portray the characters and the depth that you go at is just unimagineable. I couldn't stop reading either story and both of your vingettes with them have taken the surface of their relationship to new heights.
My fiance has read part of "Sucumb" and he thinks that; with your writing, the depth of the story and characters and the seer presence of these stories, they should be given to Lucas with a note saying, "Read These! They're what you're TRYING to do!"
My fiance has read part of "Sucumb" and he thinks that; with your writing, the depth of the story and characters and the seer presence of these stories, they should be given to Lucas with a note saying, "Read These! They're what you're TRYING to do!"
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this and I just want to say that your writing is among the best I have ever read, electronic or hard copy. The way you describe the scenes and how they are feeling is exquisite. I really hope you update soon.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome! You have GOT to be the best writer of adult fan fiction out there! Every award should go to you for your ability to paint such vivid, emotional, stirring pictures! When I read your stories I am transported there, the proverbial fly on the wall. You have such a way with words, you should be writing for a living! As far as writers of Anakin/Padme fan fiction you are by far the absolute cream of the crop! I can't wait for the next part!
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very exciting, very interestin
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