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for Broken

by Mahierj

person Cora (not signed in)
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooo good! i cant wait to see your next chapter!! keep going
person Cora
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story!! Poor Will!! Please update ASAP!!
person Amanda
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sure they could meet again and fuck! Just. not in this story, as it's yours and you apparently don't feel that they should. Nothing wrong with that. i just like to fuck and think everyone should do it 24/7, so my opinion on that is kinda biased.
OK, rant over. Loving the story, so hurry it up!
person Jade
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More.Now.Pleaze

need i say more
person Jade
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww sad

UPDATE NOW!!!
person Jacky fan
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOODDDDDDD!!!!:).
You have to continue soon.
person silverhope
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How sad and sweet at the same time. I'm looking forwrd to reading more. Who is the rapist, how does Jack know him, and why did he attack Wil? Please update soon.
person Lydia NightShade
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No!!!!!

Curse ye and yar cliffhangers! Rahr!!! hehehehehehe, oh but seriously, I liked it! I'm so excited about more. Who is this pirate? How does Jack know him? What does he want from Will?! Well, besides some non-con rapey sex.... muwahahahahahahahahaaaa!!! Can't wait for more so please don't make me!! O.O

~lydia~
person PJ
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter!!! I promise not to babble too much this time *LOL* I can not believe that the Commandore didn't just ask Will or check things out first but I guess he will always believe the worst about pirates. Great update I wonder does this person have something against Jack or maybe against Bootstap? Post more soon please.
person leann
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh! i can't wait for more! it's great so lea