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OMG! Poor Will.
What is the truth behind the rapist? Who is he? I must know. *soo curious*
Update now! Waste no time.

Oooo this is good stuff.....i can't wait for the next chapter....poor will...is he ever g tog to be able to let Jack love him??

NEWENIT

Great story. I can't believe Elizabeth, I thought she was better then that. I know with the times and the up bringing that some may feel that way but I didn't think she would. It is like she is blaming Will for something he didn't have any control over I mean how would she feel if it happened to her or even if the person sodomized her instead. Would she feel worse being raped that way or the way women usually get raped? If it was me at the time and I saw her treating him that way after something like that happened I don't think I would want anything to do with her. I personally think the ol' Commandore she tell her to 'get stuffed' or 'push off' instead of getting all hopeful that she will get back with him I mean he did say he actually liked Will in the first chapter. I know they are not close friends but he was the one who found him so I am sure he knows what happened. What would really be icing on the cake would be if the other 'high society' people of Port Royal started to 'snub' her. I guess Elizabeth doesn't love Will as much as she thought if this comes between them. Sorry for babbling again great story and update soon please. And even with all my ranting about Elizabeth I am still a Jack/Will fan *LOL*

write the next chapter soon please

Aww!

That was so cute! I'm glad Jack got out. I was starting to worry Will would have to do something... unpleasant... to get him out. I see you setting up a little James/Elizabeth pairing. That's good. She should have someone. Can't wait for more, especially when Will realizes that he loves Jack... oo la la!

~lydia~

OMG! This is such a great story.
Must update soon. GO. TYPE QUICKLY! later

That was sad...poor Will; he gets raped and Elizabeth is being a real bitch about it. Poor thing. As for the story, the plot's great and the detail's great. The rape scene was very visual and [believe me] being raped isn't something you're ever to forget. Anyway, I love the details, Jack is absolutely adorable, and I really hope you update soon. Congrats on a job well done!

Awwww!

I can never get enough Will angst... I'm such a whore lol! Oh, you write Will so cute! But who is this mysterious masked sger?ger? and will Jack be able to gut him like the poxy bastard he is?! So exciting! I love dark fiction soooooo much!

~lydia~

hmmm, more! elizabeth's such a bitch isn't she! time for jack to step in and help will out....hehehe

Oooh, that bastard had better watch out 'cause when Captain Jack Sparrow meets him he's gonna cut him into fish food and throw 'im off the dock!