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for A Pleasant Holliday?

by hellborne

person lee
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, damn, just damn, i just found this story today and read every chapter there was. You Rock
person FeyLynn
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~HUGS~ Lots and lots of ~HUGS~, luv. Please keep writing, savvy. To do otherwise would be cruel and unusual punishment to us poor lowly fanfiction readers.

person forceflow46
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey your becoming one of my five favorite athours i love this story waiting for updates please.. found this site through fanfiction.net p.s. are there any other good fanfiction sites out there for potc or star wars?

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person Miya Sparrow
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe I love it, I really do, its funny and has lots of smut, wonderful smut! :-D anyway...please update..that can't be it! oh and how many more people are going to stay on the Pearl just cause Jack and Will ask? but anyway its really cool. ahaha now all you need is Bill Turner then Jack would be very lucky. I always thought he was lucky, I mean he has Will, and half the time he has Bill also. two Turners! *sigh* and now he has Norry and Gillette! omg what a world! ahahaha but I love it, now if only disney would get a clue!
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, the review should be a smutlet in itself. You know: Gripping. Inviting. Lascivious. Irresistible. Full of kinks and teases. And just plain HOT! Not to mention the leaving me begging for more....
person littlebird
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's hot, but are you sure that tangle on the bed is physically possible? On a knee-high, man-sized cushion perhaps, but on a bed I can't envision Will and Jack having proper access at the same time. (Not that I'd have any experience with that sort of thing. Perhaps it's just my poor understanding of geometry.)
person Jazzhy
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, i liked it a lot. Please keep up dating.
person Jazzy
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love this fict. so PLEASE releases the next chapter. The story is fun but a little perdictable (sorry i cann't spell) no offence. Please keep writing this story is very good, I like the way you layed it out it is easy to read and follow. Oh, and great lemon senes. --Jazzy
person Karen
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's so much fun... I know it's been a while but I hope you finish this story,

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
person Prrrrowl
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah loves it!

Great story, luv.

Is the "le dle death" from The Vampire Armand? I remember anne rice using that phrase at the beginning of the book.
Am i right? ^.^

HUGS AND KISSES FOR YOU! I love it. I do!!

Ta ta for now, m'darling.