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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*headdesk* I shouldn't be allowed to post, I really shouldn't, especially before I finish reading things. This isn't a flame at all, the fic is good - the characters are all plausible and canon-ified and it's very well written. I think I'm just being narrow-minded and thinking 'Sparrow rescue. Hah!' I have a strange aversion to Sparrow rescue, for some reason...
NHB, who hopes she won't be eaten, and is sure she's seen Hellbourne somewhere before*~
(BTW, SEMPOTO is Stereotypical Evil Madman Phantom of the Opera Norrington. He rapes people and kicks puppies. If you'd written him you'd have to eat a LOT of fire).
NHB, who hopes she won't be eaten, and is sure she's seen Hellbourne somewhere before*~
(BTW, SEMPOTO is Stereotypical Evil Madman Phantom of the Opera Norrington. He rapes people and kicks puppies. If you'd written him you'd have to eat a LOT of fire).
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! The three hottest guys together, with just enough story to keep it interesting. And u show the characters so well! Keep up the good work! Would it be wrong to ask for more torutre and not physical? Maybe to Will? Hope not...Ja!
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this story just keeps on getting better!!! More! More! More!
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story as per usual, it would be great if Will was too nervous to perform for jack when he get his stitches out, and Jack becoming very Jealous of Norri, just think of the sex they'd need to make up!!!!
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story should never end.. i love it too goddamn much ^_^ it is really hot mansmut. i know im a sick puppy but it is so great. it is very passionat to and i love it. plez write more soon i so cant wait... lol...hurry!
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I found Pirates of the Caribbean!" I havent read this yet,but when I do I will send you a review.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. Love this story.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is Fantastic, incredibly hot, please don't stop writing.
Damn I need a cold shower
Damn I need a cold shower
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what is the nautical term for kidnappin'? oh well, anyway this is funny i have enjoyed the first 17 chapters and i would incourage you to write more. im not a big Norington fan but i have to say that you made this fic very titilating. plez keep posting.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not saying anything against your muse. (Never mess with Jacklyn Sparrow-Chan...)
But - that demon was such a nice little demon. Violent. Evil. Writing slash.
Do you think he will return anytime soon? I've really grown fond of him, you know?
I was hoping for some more "seizures" Jack might have as aftereffects from that drug.
One could imagine that it takes some days to wear off completely -
days until people are really safe around him. (As the jail scene indicated,
though it was sadly lacking sex.)
Where did he get that interesting stuff from in the first place, and why did he tell
William never to use it on him? (Flashback?)
But - that demon was such a nice little demon. Violent. Evil. Writing slash.
Do you think he will return anytime soon? I've really grown fond of him, you know?
I was hoping for some more "seizures" Jack might have as aftereffects from that drug.
One could imagine that it takes some days to wear off completely -
days until people are really safe around him. (As the jail scene indicated,
though it was sadly lacking sex.)
Where did he get that interesting stuff from in the first place, and why did he tell
William never to use it on him? (Flashback?)