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for A Pleasant Holliday?

by hellborne

person Sarryn
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! sto story draws me back again and again.
person clonesofconfusion
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad t'all, mate. Lookin' forward to more.
person NEWENIT
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO FAIR!!!!! Now you are teasing us!! I've been following this story and I am really enjoying it. Please post more soon.

NEWENIT
person Sarryn
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story continues to please without fail. Wonderful!
person littlebird
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM

> APPOLOGY: My muse wanted soft and delicate.
>A demon broke in and kidnapped the muse, giving me this instead.
Good demon!
*pads demon between the horns*
Bad muse! Got the second half of chapter 11 all fluffy. Demon, go for her!
@hellborne: Thanks for updating so often! Carry on!
And stick to that ingenious demon, please!
person Sarryn
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intense! I can feel the blood pounding through my veins after reading this. Gorgeous!
person Sarryn
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story continues to delight and entertain. Thank you for sharing it with this community!
person Sarryn
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was too delicious for mere words! So hot, so sexy!
person jophjode
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is relly fun reading.. i hope you write more chapters, you have such a good imagination!!
person FireFly
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving your fic! The lemon was delicious :) I'm looking forward to more. Fantastic job!