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person Anon
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story before and it was definately a lot longer, i came back to it because it rocked but maybe you tried to alter it and the rest of it got deleted? Also, you had a long Dracula story on here which has gone missing. I hope you're not taking them down because they are very good.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very good except for the sudden jump in the middle. It went from Sonny telling Michael about the birth of his twins to Sonny suddenly fingering his ass. Other than that error, very good. You write these characters very very well.
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schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass story