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for The Marquis

by KittyMartin

person JarlOfWarsong
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nearly died laughing. Thank you.
person HonoNoKitsune (nsi)
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short and, um, I think if I said "sweet" it would be taken the wrong way by a certain Marquis... lol! Anyway, I thought the writing style was amusing and, yes, it sounded like something he would say! Though It was very short... Write another! But make it longer, please! ^^;;
person AngelBlue
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short but good. I very much enjoyed it.

AB
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was far too short, and there was very little of a plot there. ou aou are going to use dialogue of the movie it should at least be only to pick up your piece, not the main support of the whole thing. It would be far better if you had an idea which you could develop. ou nou need to er...vent those ideas, put them into the context of a fic or just leave them on your hard-drive.