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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Captivating. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that you abondoned it so close to them meeting up again.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more. PLEASE write more. I love this story so very much.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to keep this going... i read it till this last installment and have to admit that I need to know what is going to happen, Will they find Naomi, will there be more escapades on the side etc... OOOhghhh i hope to see a new chap real soon.. XXXOOO
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don't usually review stories that aren't finished yet, but since you seem so eager for feedback...
i didn't like it at first because the whole 'spanking the maid' thing seemed kinda cliche, but since then i've been totally sucked in. i originally was just looking for Twinporn because, well, you know, but the plot is compelling and i wait with bated breath for your next update.
there ya go
i didn't like it at first because the whole 'spanking the maid' thing seemed kinda cliche, but since then i've been totally sucked in. i originally was just looking for Twinporn because, well, you know, but the plot is compelling and i wait with bated breath for your next update.
there ya go
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What. A. Fantastic. Story!! I love it! Please update soon!
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story, and your OC is so unpredictable and fascinating to read about. The Twins are more in character here than in any other fanfic I've read- that's simply amazing! It's almost as if you had the same mind as the brothers who created their characters *applauds loudly* Heh, not to mention the sex scenes are great and deliciously descriptive. I know it's been more than three months since you updated, but pleeease finish this fanfic- it's too great to be left eternally unresolved (esp. when it stops at such an exciting point)!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooooooo awsome. the twins are so in character and the sex scenes are great! The only tidy bit that threw me off was durring some of the scenes, i got a little confused as far as positioning, but other then that, it was great! =3 (sits and waits for an update)
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dam i want the book........lol then again wish i could phase out and in like the twin's. Not to mention i want there house.......and there money....oh well can always wish right? Of course i can anyway great job so far. Can't wait till you add more. It's getting very interesting......And she's very smart....but how could she of afforded a GTO ? lol aren't those like majorly exspensive? And God Why would she just trade it for a jeep :((. lol anyway good job and i can't wait for more
Nick
Nick
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Just wanted to let you know that this is one of the first stories that I've really enjoyed that involved the Twins. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
Happy Writing!
Just wanted to let you know that this is one of the first stories that I've really enjoyed that involved the Twins. Hope to see more of your work in the future.
Happy Writing!