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for Training the new maid.

by magnolia31

person Lisn
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love IT!!! OMG!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
person awaitingmymate
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please-please-PLEASE!!!

You simply must continue & update SOON! VERY soon! Have been tantalizingly enthralled by your writing, from the very beginning in Chapter 1!..

Can not just simply put into words how very taken I am with your writing technique. Very impressed, VERY;)

Now pleeeeeease, be nice & update soon, K?

IE
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person MadeManX3
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definately a great story. Nice blend of sex and violence. Hope to see you continue it.
person Nicolina
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry!!! I don´t think I wrote a review the first time I read this VERY VERY exciting and hot story. I love it. It completely gave me a new obsession... twinfics! There are too few good ones out there though.

Nic.
person Anonymous
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this. It is soooo good already. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person SilverClaw
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story ^_^ just to let you know... lol
person Anonymous
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You SOOO have to continue this. It's amazing!
person Nova
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been trying to find a fic with the Twins as main characters and finally found one. Though I'm not be down somethings, I STILL LIKE IT! Can't wait to see where this goes! How are they going to find her? Talk about a clever bitch. Lol.
person Adria
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and check DAILY for the next chapter. Pleeeease make the next one! I'm so looking forward to what happens when they catch her ^^ *cackles evilly*
person Thelma & Louise
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase update sooooooon, my best friend and I really enjoy your writing style and your creative... uh... imagery. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaase updddddaaaaate Sooon, we love you and the twins a... Lot. Pleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssseee.........................