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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, with wonderful Twinny dialogue.
MORE! I demand it!
MORE! I demand it!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story I've reviewed on this site, and by far the best I've read!
Not only is it hotliekwhoa, which it most certainly is, you've made the characters come alive! from the handful of lines that the Twins have in the movies, you've recreated their attitudes exceptionally well. I was especially pleased with their method of speach. You made it seem natural for One or Two to refer to himself in the plural, other stories I've seen that use that device seemed so impressed with their own cleverness for doing it that they overused it and ruined the story.
And the BDSM shit rocks my socks. gotta love a pale guy with a riding crop. ^_^ Rock on!
Not only is it hotliekwhoa, which it most certainly is, you've made the characters come alive! from the handful of lines that the Twins have in the movies, you've recreated their attitudes exceptionally well. I was especially pleased with their method of speach. You made it seem natural for One or Two to refer to himself in the plural, other stories I've seen that use that device seemed so impressed with their own cleverness for doing it that they overused it and ruined the story.
And the BDSM shit rocks my socks. gotta love a pale guy with a riding crop. ^_^ Rock on!
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, great story. Are you gonna finish it?
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story- it really is a pleasant change to read a story by someone who knows how to write. Don't let a small # of reviews stop you- you'd probably have more if readers didn't have to register in order to do so! Judging by the hits your story's received so far, you've got some fans. Give us some more, please!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how pleased I am to find someone who 1.) has a decent understanding and application of grammar ( if you're going to write, do it right ;) and 2.) does not plagarize! Whoo! Good for you! Keep it up!
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great work, love the story line, and keep the writing coming. I look forward to the next chapter.