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Interesting story, I like it. Would definitely be interested in a sequel. Or maybe something explaining why there are Aztec gods in the Caribbean. :-p

Thanks to everyone who reviewed. Anni, I fixed that line in the last chapter. Sorry about that, I didn't realise I had made that much of a mess of the line. The sequal is called 'Once on the Waves'

I'm sorry, I don't understand. What does this mean: "The small mind dried his hands on the total provided as he watched Governor Swan ago before his eyes." It was in the section called Port Royal right before the end of ttorytory???

oh hell, of course you should write a sequal. i mean, if you didn't write that last stuff, then you could get away without a sequal...maybe, but you're just screwed now. so you must write more and more and more. yep, poor you, you have to keep writing. haha, have you gotten the hint yet? yes, good, i'm sick of finding different ways to say you should continue. can't wait for more

Great story I am glad they are together at last. As far as a sequel goes I would say YES but it is up to you. If you do I will be right here to read it!!!

Please update. sooooooooooooooooooon.

Great update. I think Jack has the right of it Elizabeth likes the 'high society' life too much and would sacrifice freedom to keep it. If it was just money well being a pirate can make you rich even if you don't always look like you are rich. And she was raised in a good household with servents, etc I don't think she wants freedom enough to give all of that up. Will on the other hand loved her enough to give up his freedom only he found he couldn't live with her being so spoiled and childish. Anyway I am babbling *sorry* post more soon and I hope that was just a dream at the end.

gutter gutter gutter gutter! Gutter muse! Please?

Jack cream whipped cream Will lick cream whip...

OI. That's contagious and addictive. bad combination, ya know.

Me wants slash. me likes slash. Methinks I will like your slash.



In an eclectic, disparate, unfocussed but with baited brekindkind of way,

~ Jenna.

This sounds very interesting. I like how you had Elizabeth and Will not getting along that was a new twist her being jealous and them not being married yet is a plus. I think she is jealous because Will still has his freedom and Elizabeth got a taste of that and now she is back to being the 'proper girl' again and doesn't like it. Plus it seems like she is embarassed that she and Will are courting. I am curious about who attacked Miss Swan or did she set that up herself to get back at Will. Maybe Norringtion saw all the broken things and Elizabeth was crying and jumped to conclusions. Anyway great start update soon please!!!!!

Hey that was mean!!!!!! What a terrible thing to do to your readers!!!!! Please post soon!!!!! You'[ve got me hooked...very good so far....first chapter was a little hard to understand but the second one was much better....could have been me though...*really tired* any ways make sure to post more soon! Savvy?