rate_review Reviews

Wow, this is quite a concept! Was doubtful at first, fearing fangirlisms for Africa by the mere nature of the story, but within a paragraph or so I was impressed.

The fourth chapter threw me a bit - far more involved than the others - but it was still welcome if not a touch graphic. (My goodness you have a fair idea of a male body, eh!)

I'd like to see more of this. I'd say some Davy Jones (big fan, lulz), but it would be a hell of a stretch considering the current characters.

You know - also being a Subaru nut, I've had a few visions of Sparrow in modern times screaming down the road, laughing his face off, at the wheel of a black version 5 WRX STi. I love how you've alternated times so far, so if you did another chapter, REALLY taking Jack's 21st-century virginity would be spectacular. Hurrhurr...I'm sure he'd be a right mess after a good drifting lesson or so...

The potential for him being on the set of another PotC movie... *strokes chin* The possibilities are endless for this story, definitely deserves more. :)

Btw, nice to see someone actually write in the FEEL of the time. Right language, and the characters are not marred by 21st-century perceptions. Refreshing...adds so much more believability and realism to it...thank you for displaying some serious writing skills! <3

o.o You know...Sparrington has always been entertaining...can anyone say orgy? ^_^ keep going!

will you write a book two? i enjoyed this one a lot.

Very cool story! So inventive and creative. I personally would love more Will or even Orlando thrown into the mix! I did laugh when Johnny kept telling Will that he wasn't gay. I do wonder that after spending time with Will what would happen when he meets up with Orlando again.

Very excellent story! Thank you for sharing!

Oh...my...god! That was so incredibly hot! I think I'm on fire. The two hottest guys on earth screwing each other senseless, what more can I ask for? Yes, a sequel to this is definitely a must!!! Hope to see lots more soon. Is there any chance that Orlando and Johnny could meet their alters in the same story? PLEASE, PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!!

Heh heh. I love the carriage... After reading all of the story, that was the first thing to come to mind. How sad!! Lol. LOVED it!! PLEASE update soon! Can Will come to Johnny's world with Jack next?

Well m'dear.....Another interestin story. I think you aught to go on --nods-- that my opinion.

i beg of you, please continue this, i'm sorry i didn't review before......i'm so very sorry.
but, i read this a couple of months ago, and i say, IT'S GREAT!!! the most magnificint piece of work i've laid eyes on!! please so a sequel, for me...? at least??



~arien calen~

OH MY GOD PLEASE CONTINUE TOSSES IN MORT AND SHOOTER MAKE HIM REALY MESSED UP ^_____^ ANY WAY I LOVED IT SO MUCH IT WAS COOL I LOVE THE PART WHERE WILL SAVED THEM FORM THE HUMILATION POOR JOHNNY I COULD FEAL HIS PAIN IF THIS WAS A MOVIE HE WOULD LOOK LIKE A BROCKEN DOLL THAT WAS JUST PERFECT I LOVED IT

*BOWS TO YOU*

I'm really enjoying this story. The characterizations are just excellent. I do hope you continue to add to it. Keep up the good work!