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person littlebird
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic - please continue!
I only wonder how Johnny will explain to the doctor why he needs a checkup for syphilis. *g*
person shit
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude cool fucked up but cool get to some new cappies want to read more lovin the hole jonny jake thing great writing
shibby
person Mercurial
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dances around the room* that was bloody great!!!

Please, let there be more?! *makes puppy dog eyes at you*

~ Jenna.
person --
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so twisted. I love it!
person Diana
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! i've been checking here everyday, hoping for an update. Good work! Even if it's not 'your cup of tea', you're doing an amazing job! More soon!
person Cait
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! The third chapter was to die for.
You must update asap. Type fast. Later
person Mercurial
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Squeeeeeeeeeeee!* You added apteapter! yay!! Please... let there be more?

Petulantly,
~ Jenna.
person Anni
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one twisted story! You have got a great imagination. I really wondered what you would do with it after chapter one, which seemed very PWP. (Feathered) hats off to you!
person Cait
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chaptIs tIs that the end of it? Please continue with it. The story is too good to end it here. Later
person Diana
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this! There may be more.. I'm hoping? ^_^