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for Something Sweet

by circamoore

person julie
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, I think Matilda could have at leats been 15, then it wouldn't of been as creepy.
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you cut out the smut! Bad author. But the story was good anyway.
person Sian Webber-Jones
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is the room meant to be spinning?????? *moan whine vomit*
p.s Tom Kinnaird has a small dick. TELL THE WORLD!!!!!!!!
person JB
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
STFU Vicious. This story is in the MOVIE category, so stop being such a nerd.
person Vicious
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Besides the fact that this smut doesn't belong in the Matilda universe:

The Matilda of the Roald Dahl book loses her powers when she was given appropriate intellectual stimulation.

And I rated the fic low for a reason.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How the fuck did you see slashiness in MATILDA?

I mean, sorry if this is true, but do you have erotic fantasies about your MOTHER?

If you do, I'm sorry. I didn't realize. If not, you're an asshole.
person Umm....
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're one sick person, you know that?

Ugh.
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you sick bastard... matlida?....god what is wrong wiht you?!
person No one
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good :)
Please keep writing.
And... More details? ^^
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it but it needs to have more sex in it so that we can get into it more. hell there needs to be another chapter of when they are redecorating the room. but with a lot of sex in it.